a journey of awareness
Mannequin MasqueradeWrapped in cellophane,Toes aquiver, ballet leapsOut of frothy tutusInto the race of gazellesAcross African tundra.[Disposable Tanka July 23, 2010]Dr. Mike
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(Silly me. Thought of a revision to the first tanka attempt I posted; this is the revision.)Pour oilon sandpaper,honey over velvet.Love again, anyway. Nothingresists.
(Also, I decided on a cinquain again instead of a tanka.);)
I really like your blog. Just discovered, love the photos too.
m.fletcher:Thanks. I'm glad you like the blog, and I hope you get a chance to come back often. (Read all you want; I'll write more.)H. K.
Mannequin Masquerade
ReplyDeleteWrapped in cellophane,
Toes aquiver, ballet leaps
Out of frothy tutus
Into the race of gazelles
Across African tundra.
[Disposable Tanka July 23, 2010]
Dr. Mike
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ReplyDelete(Silly me. Thought of a revision to the first tanka attempt I posted; this is the revision.)
ReplyDeletePour oil
on sandpaper,
honey over velvet.
Love again, anyway. Nothing
resists.
(Also, I decided on a cinquain again instead of a tanka.)
ReplyDelete;)
I really like your blog. Just discovered, love the photos too.
ReplyDeletem.fletcher:
ReplyDeleteThanks. I'm glad you like the blog, and I hope you get a chance to come back often. (Read all you want; I'll write more.)
H. K.